Notebook Week 10 - 9b

Looking at past readings and taking note on what teachers have corrected me on in the past is my usages of pronouns referencing. Instead of saying "it" "they" and other non-specified terms, I should use the proper nouns to describe the point of contention in my writing. I realized misuse or lacking the use of pronoun references cause my writing to loose focus or a point in the overall story.